I fall into oblivion
Wondering in a daze
I look to see you standing there
A smile on your face
You hold your hand out to me
And I find it hard to breath
I want to be in your arms
And never slip away
I find myself falling
Falling faster
Faster for you
I never felt so scared inside
Yet happy all at the same time
I want to hear you call my name
And tell me everything is all right
I only want to see your face
Just once outside my dreams
I always seem to find you there
But never when I wake
When I open my eyes your smile and touch slowly fade away.
No matter what I say or do I seem to be falling
Falling faster in love with you
7 comments:
Nice. I can relate. Go check my blog out, there are hilarious numbers on there. :)
hey sweet poem. I've been thinking bt penning down one myself, but somehow i don't end up dioing so. may be now i might.
Oh wow this is really good! Have you ever thought of publishing your stuff? (get back to be on my blog)^_^
I think we can all relate to these feelings.
Cool poem.
I'm not one who can put thoughts & feeling down in rhyme fashion...........lordy I'm lucky to spell!!!
wow, you need to check out my blogs, theyre pretty much like yours.
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I think I'm the only one here who can't relate to that, haha. I don't think I've ever experienced "love", but I've had my share of crushes.
Anyway, cool poem, although I couldn't understand it at the level I would have liked.
Khalid
http://alifeinterruptedblogger.blogspot.com
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